What happened is that you lost.

I wanted to like this book but I couldn't.
I wanted to sympathize with you but I couldn't.
I wanted to like you as a candidate but I couldn't.
I didn't want that guy to win but he did.

Clinton's style isn't awful but it's USA today at best. These are at least two nails on the chalk board:
"when I read the news, i wanted to throw the remote." Who reads with a remote control?
"Almost no one has lost a presidential election (hi Al hi John hi Mitt)" WTF.

Every reason she gives for what happened has already been debated ad nauseam for the last year. She won't blame anyone on her team or really take full responsibility. No new revelations, still campaigning for something.