This didn't quite go exactly how I expected it. I'm not quite sure that the ending makes that much sense.
I'd try something by Breakwell again, but I wouldn't go through the whole book if it was too much like this.
Not bad, not great.
Edit to add that one thing that bugged me right to the end was the number of characters. Pair that with their names (alpha, beta, gamma, etc.) that gave no indication of gender, and I really struggled to tell them apart besides like Delta and Epsilon. Also, I listened to the audiobook, and the narrator did a bad job at a couple of sentences. The way some of them came out were like:
Ok then said, Gamma gently
rather than
Ok then, said Gamma gently
Not massive, but it took me out of the moment on more than one occasion.