Reviews and Comments

A jewel that's a little rough around the edges

This book has a solid world, interesting protagonists, and a good power scale. There are some rough edges in the plot structure. Towards the beginning there seems to be a few times where a connecting plot point was just left out, and seems to leave the reader wondering why certain actions were taken or what exactly was going on. However this soon smooths out and we get to see most plot points resolved by the end. All in all I enjoyed the read, so you might too.

Exactly the right balance between plot and grind

This is a litrpg book that actually tells a story, rather than focusing on the grind and random direction many players might take a game.