Maika reviewed Joe Golem and the drowning city by Michael Mignola
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2 stars
While I enjoyed this story enough to see it through to the end, there was something about the way the book was written that rubbed me the wrong way and had me forcing myself to resist putting it down unfinished. The plot, some of the characters, and particularly the setting (a post-apocalyptic, half-sunken New York where ghosts and old magic are real) were compelling, but the writing often felt like it would have served better as vivid description for an artist illustrating a graphic novel - Mike Mignola's illustrations were small and sparse, but enough to have me imagining how he would have drawn it all. While other times the book felt like it had been written for a younger audience - except I've read books for younger readers that didn't do what this one did, so perhaps that's an unfair comparison.
I felt like too much time was spent …
While I enjoyed this story enough to see it through to the end, there was something about the way the book was written that rubbed me the wrong way and had me forcing myself to resist putting it down unfinished. The plot, some of the characters, and particularly the setting (a post-apocalyptic, half-sunken New York where ghosts and old magic are real) were compelling, but the writing often felt like it would have served better as vivid description for an artist illustrating a graphic novel - Mike Mignola's illustrations were small and sparse, but enough to have me imagining how he would have drawn it all. While other times the book felt like it had been written for a younger audience - except I've read books for younger readers that didn't do what this one did, so perhaps that's an unfair comparison.
I felt like too much time was spent telling me things that I had either already been told (sometimes just a paragraph or page earlier) or precisely spelling out things that were easily gleaned from the already descriptive action and context. So more than a few times I encountered passages that felt redundant or overly expository. Some characters were sadly underdeveloped relative to their significance to other characters in the story. Dialogue often seemed unnaturally expository - even after adopting the idea that perhaps some of the characters simply spoke in a stylized manner. Basically the writing felt clumsy.
I agree with another reviewer who described this book as an extended prologue to another book. Looking back on it now, it's more or less a roundabout origin story for one character - a character who I feel has considerable potential. Perhaps that's because Mike Mignola and Christopher Golden intend to return to this tale. I hope they do as I'd like to see how the world and some of the characters develop, but I can't help wishing it would be as a full-fledged comic instead of a sparsely illustrated novel. For as much as I enjoyed the setting and story, I wanted to like this book a lot more than I actually did.