BillieCodes reviewed Critical Failures III by Robert Bevan
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2 stars
It reads just like any other RPG book, where the actual platform for the game doesn't make much difference. Fairly puerile humour, lots of gay, you're racist, dick and scatological jokes. One female character in entire book.
Beyond that the story itself was actually funny, and well written, despite it's flaws. I dunno if I'll bother with the next in the series though. It feels like the author could be really good, they just need a bit more experience writing less... stereotypical young teenage boy stuff.