Fulminata reviewed Stratagem by Yoshiki Tanaka (Legend of the Galactic Heroes, #04)
Review of 'Stratagem' on 'Goodreads'
3 stars
Like the previous volume, this one also starts slow. Unlike the previous volume, it never really picks up. That's because this is the first volume in the series to not be a self contained story. It sets up the conflicts to be explored in the next volume.
Also, the entire series suffers from a problem that I haven't mentioned in my previous reviews, and which was more apparent in this volume: failing to follow accepted norms in formatting the dialogue. Generally, if there is a conversation, and the speaker changes, then either the new speaker should be identified, or there should be a paragraph break. In this series there are both paragraph breaks where the speaker doesn't change, and changes in speaker within the same paragraph. Both in cases where the speaker isn't directly identified! I'm guessing that this is a failure in translation, and that the Japanese original follows …
Like the previous volume, this one also starts slow. Unlike the previous volume, it never really picks up. That's because this is the first volume in the series to not be a self contained story. It sets up the conflicts to be explored in the next volume.
Also, the entire series suffers from a problem that I haven't mentioned in my previous reviews, and which was more apparent in this volume: failing to follow accepted norms in formatting the dialogue. Generally, if there is a conversation, and the speaker changes, then either the new speaker should be identified, or there should be a paragraph break. In this series there are both paragraph breaks where the speaker doesn't change, and changes in speaker within the same paragraph. Both in cases where the speaker isn't directly identified! I'm guessing that this is a failure in translation, and that the Japanese original follows proper norms for written Japanese, but that the translator is being too faithful to the original and not making it more readable in translation.
These two issues combined caused me to lower my rating on this volume in comparison to the previous three volumes.