Gremriel reviewed Breaking Legacies by Zoe Reed
Review of 'Breaking Legacies' on 'Goodreads'
4 stars
Excellent self-published fantasy, with an intricate plot, very likable characters and a detailed world.
The chemistry between the the main characters is off the charts, and 12 chapters of built-up attraction culminates in an explosive love scene.
And then we get chapter 13. That was very well done, and was something telegraphed from very early on, but it was so subtle, I was pleasantly surprised.
For a self-published novel, it was very well written, and not a single typo anywhere. It could use some work in formatting, but it was hardly noticable.
One minor point of critique: the author delves deep into the emotional state of the characters, but I had the impression that every 10 pages or so, we had another crying jag. So many tears were shed...
