Fight and Flight

, #4

Published Sept. 4, 2017 by Rocket Hat Industries.

ISBN:
978-0-9862399-7-7
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Martin and his friends discovered that their world is computer generated and that by altering the code, they could alter reality. They traveled back in time to Medieval England to live as wizards. Almost everything they’ve done since then has, in one way or another, blown up in their faces.

So of course they decide to make dragons. It does not go well.

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I wanted to like this, but I just couldn't. There was an infuriating amount of repetition in one of the chapters. The point could had been made in a quarter of the time.

There were so many self-made issues that could have easily been avoided. Mistakes that just don't make sense, like Gary forgetting he can fly multiple times.

The second half of the book was better than the first, but I found at least 10 spelling, grammatical, or factual errors in the book. I don't mind one or two here or there, but Martin was called Martian at one point. Kyle spoke while he was unconscious. Too was misspelled as to. Other words were just plain missing. See my highlights for examples. This book is in serious need of some proofreading.

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