stupidlamb reviewed Revealed by P. C. Cast
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1 star
Pls just end this, it gets worse and worse! The story is great as such but its terribly written, way too fast, no characters to like, cant stand the pushover main character who just never grows up and its the same book after book. Cant stand Stark either, never could from the first moment we met him, he never grows up either, is a petty jaloux bf that does the things Zoey kept saing she didnt want to accept in her life again yet she keeps sticking to him just yuk. Oh and aparently Shaylin is now gay, that came out of nowhere, as in half a page boom ok moving on very short and no indication at all so far. Theres a change in direction and oppinions every so often, without us knowing about it, ive seen several times where they say left and now suddenly say right and …
Pls just end this, it gets worse and worse! The story is great as such but its terribly written, way too fast, no characters to like, cant stand the pushover main character who just never grows up and its the same book after book. Cant stand Stark either, never could from the first moment we met him, he never grows up either, is a petty jaloux bf that does the things Zoey kept saing she didnt want to accept in her life again yet she keeps sticking to him just yuk. Oh and aparently Shaylin is now gay, that came out of nowhere, as in half a page boom ok moving on very short and no indication at all so far. Theres a change in direction and oppinions every so often, without us knowing about it, ive seen several times where they say left and now suddenly say right and out of nowhere they are now 'on the right track'. And the ending of this book is /facepalm. Why she would be so dramatic and go to jail, when we clearly see they were alive when she left then, but oh no she wouldnt question that at all, ill just go with u. If ur gonna write about characters, u write about characters! You skip too fast, thers no bkbone so likeability, its just sped through and very forced at times like the writer are struggling to write the books. And what a joke with all these 'new york times bestseller hits' on so many books, half the time its just payed promo, and it certainly is in the case of these books, it has no quality after the first few books, getting worse and worse, with the same stuff happening with slight variations, or otherwise totally predictable. I hope for 1 last book and then THE END, stop this madness now pls, you clearly dont know how to write a story where we get to feel we know the lead character, and like her.