This is the most slipshod comic I have ever read. The story isn't bad -the art and editing are what utterly fail.

There isn't a woman in the book who can stand without thrusting out her boobs and bum. Preferably with a slit skirt and/or tank top in the middle of the winter. Considering Jim Butcher generally goes to at least some effort realistic women (the humans anyway), this is particularly appalling.

Further, the artist paid no attention to the story. Example: Harry mocks an enemy for wearing a cape. The artist has drawn the man in a coat. In another scene Thomas clearly kills the villains assistant. For pages later she is back standing beside her master. Harry comments on having to fight one handed while gesturing with a clearly mobile 'ruined' hand. Harry's apartment is shown with large above ground windows.