Reviews and Comments

StorydevGrace

StorydevGrace@bookwyrm.social

Joined 1 year, 5 months ago

I’m a storytelling coach taking storytellers on a journey to please the muse and find success. It's not about being right; it’s about learning right.

This link opens in a pop-up window

Danni Brooke: Girl for the Job (2023, Pan Macmillan)

Review of 'Girl for the Job' on 'Storygraph'

As someone who has spent most of her life living a sheltered life in a rural community, it was enlightening to read about the life of an inner-city police officer, and about the lives of the people she encountered in that environment, without the filter of fictional prose to soften the edges.

Steven Pressfield: The War of Art (2003, Warner Books)

Review of 'The War of Art' on 'Storygraph'

TL;DR: Get out of your own way.
That said, unlike many other people who say the above phrase until they're blue in the face while the rest of us throw up our own hands or smack them in their smug faces with a heavy frying pan, Pressfield does a good job of pointing out ways you might succeed in actually following through on this age-old annoying piece of crinkly advice.

Philip Pullman, Philip Pullman: Good Man Jesus and the Scoundrel Christ (2017, Canongate Books)

Review of 'Good Man Jesus and the Scoundrel Christ' on 'Storygraph'

The prose was dry and devoid of any insight into the character's emotions other than when they spoke about them out loud. I suspect that was a choice, reflecting the dry writing of the source material. Don't come at me - I'm a bible fan (secular). That said, if I hadn't been listening to it while playing cities skylines, my ADHD ass would have given up on it midway - though that is true of many books. Overall, I am a fan of biblical retellings, and this is pretty good. I've read worse fanfiction.

Tiago Forte: Building a Second Brain (Hardcover, 2022, Atria Books)

For the first time in history, we have instantaneous access to the world’s knowledge. There …

Review of 'Building a Second Brain' on 'Storygraph'

Remember that when you build your PKM/second brain, no one method is necessarily going to work for you. There are some good tips here, but take only what works for you and leave the rest.

Marissa Meyer: Cinder (2012)

As plague ravages the overcrowded Earth, observed by a ruthless lunar people, Cinder, a gifted …

Review of 'Cinder' on 'Storygraph'

Bad move for the only polyamorous character to be the villain. The story was otherwise good. When we struggle with representation in general, bad representation is a gut punch, and it's an effort to look past it.

Edgar P. Jacobs: La marque jaune -t6 (French language, 1996)

The Yellow "M" (French: La Marque Jaune ("The Yellow Mark")) by the Belgian artist Edgar …

Review of 'La marque jaune -t6' on 'Storygraph'

I felt like I was experiencing the story like an adult watching kids perform a romantasy play, complete with a shallow understanding of its themes.
It starts so well with an amazing premise, but after chapter one, all that is thrown out of the window. A badass assassin who would do anything for her freedom will later whine about wanting to sleep in, as if the consequences were being late for school and not execution.
Then we get to the romance arc. Jealousy as a theme can be done so well, but the depiction of it in this book is shallow, and I hate when it is used as a driving emotion to suit certain circumstances without resolution, ESPECIALLY when it fuels a love triangle, and ESPECIALLY when its used to dumb down the majority of the female side characters for the protag to verbally wail on. This set back …