I love this creation - the character(s), the worlds, the situations

I don't love the writing or the structure of the story. I'm often close to picturing the scene or touching on understanding of a new wrinkle that is just slightly withheld or unexplained. In Okorafor's defense, I'm starting to wonder if it's the novella form that bothers me more than her skill as a story teller.

5-star imagination with 3-star writing