thom_reads_books commented on The Gathering Storm by Robert Jordan (The Wheel of Time, Book 12)
So far, this book is disappointing. The writing -which Sanderson explains in the Foreword that he kept his style, but matched it to Jordan's - is either sub par or needed much better copy editing. I've come across multiple instances where sentences started with the same word back to back. I've seen (and forgotten) other errors already. And just now a scene is described, where a person is said to "study the papers" only for a sentence shortly after to state for the same character to be "still watching her". With no described change in the situation. And I'm not 1/5 into the book.
This isn't helping my feeling at all, that I'm really only going to finish the series to HAVE itbfinisgrdit finished (again).