Dungeon Born

, #1

paperback, 401 pages

Published May 22, 2019 by Mountaindale Press.

ISBN:
978-1-950914-05-0
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reviewed Dungeon Born by Dakota Krout (The Divine Dungeon, #1)

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This is a weird one in the sense that it's really bad, but I didn't hate it.

For one, this book tries it's best to fulfil the challenge "add an adverb for every verb". Which is aggravated by the other challenge - to add a "say" synonym for every line of dialog. This naturally leads to some of them being nonsensical. But there are other dumb things. [spoiler]I was most annoyed when the protagonist being rude to someone and then doubling down on that was described and treated as "presenting a good argument". A close runner up was the one where the book says something like "learning to use a weapon takes a long time" and immediately continues to manage every kind of leveling for our protagonists in a really short span of time.[/spoiler]

The plot is let's take videogame mechanics and put them as the basis of a fantasy …

reviewed Dungeon Born by Dakota Krout (The Divine Dungeon, #1)

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I love the sorry and the magic system in this book. However, the writing is unfortunately a little irritating.

Many, many adjectives describing how people said things. Lots of telling how, instead of telling what.

However, there are plenty of cute puns and jokes that I'd always thought would be fun to include in a book.

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