Taylor Drew reviewed Bind Me Tighter Still by Lara Ehrlich
Somewhat underwhelming feminist Little Mermaid story
2 stars
I found the concept for this story really interesting. It calls back to The Little Mermaid to form its base, but takes on a strongly feminist tone, though it's not necessarily extremely explicit in this. Exploring the monstrousness of the relationship Ceto and Naia do and don't have was something that was really interesting to me. It also had a very queer undertone. These are all things I really liked about the story.
That being said, the overall execution fell a bit flat for me. I really like stories told in present tense and stories that shift perspective and time, but there just wasn't time to feel any kind of connection with any of the characters. Nothing really surprised me or caught me off guard in any meaningful way and even though the ending had what it took to be moving, I found that I didn't really care either …
I found the concept for this story really interesting. It calls back to The Little Mermaid to form its base, but takes on a strongly feminist tone, though it's not necessarily extremely explicit in this. Exploring the monstrousness of the relationship Ceto and Naia do and don't have was something that was really interesting to me. It also had a very queer undertone. These are all things I really liked about the story.
That being said, the overall execution fell a bit flat for me. I really like stories told in present tense and stories that shift perspective and time, but there just wasn't time to feel any kind of connection with any of the characters. Nothing really surprised me or caught me off guard in any meaningful way and even though the ending had what it took to be moving, I found that I didn't really care either way. I just wasn't invested in anything that was happening. Given how emotionally fraught the story is, my lack of emotional commitment to the story honestly comes as a bit of a surprise. Even though the concept and key features interested me, I just didn't care for the storytelling itself.
I want to be emotionally invested in a story like this, but my experience ended up feeling clinical and detached. I felt no raw emotion when reading Ceto and Naia's story and I finished the book unconvinced by the emotions presented in the story either and I'm sorry about that.