A Closure to a Chapter that Started 70,000 years ago
Overall, it was a good sequel and closing of the first chapter that spanned thousands of years. It also established the universe of this fiction world better as well as the characters growth.
However, there were too many lengthy dialogues from David, it felt like he was a history professor than a character analysing historical facts. I had to fight myself from skipping anything during that part. Maybe I'm biased, since I'm pretty much familiar with those events he explained.
It is also refreshing that the novel ended as a closer to the first, although there was an obvious hint of a sequel, the ending did not feel, not even pointed, that way.
It got me very curious though what earth would look like if Kate chose not to reverse the devolution protocol.
Posted Rating: 4 out of 5 stars Actual Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
I continue to find myself pleasantly surprised with Riddle’s The Origin Mystery Trilogy and that has made reading this story exciting and interesting for me. I find Dr. Kate Warner to be an interesting protagonist because she doesn't compromise who she is and what she thinks for the sake of others. Kate cares about people, those she loves and humanity as a whole, something which is continually exploited as a weakness in her and yet, even knowing that, she doesn't change and still cares! While it is typical to show caring for others as a weakness, I think that Riddle also does an excellent job of showing how Kate’s ability to care is also her greatest strength. Kate’s ability to care lends to her ability as a scientist; she doesn't see those suffering from the plague …
Posted Rating: 4 out of 5 stars Actual Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
I continue to find myself pleasantly surprised with Riddle’s The Origin Mystery Trilogy and that has made reading this story exciting and interesting for me. I find Dr. Kate Warner to be an interesting protagonist because she doesn't compromise who she is and what she thinks for the sake of others. Kate cares about people, those she loves and humanity as a whole, something which is continually exploited as a weakness in her and yet, even knowing that, she doesn't change and still cares! While it is typical to show caring for others as a weakness, I think that Riddle also does an excellent job of showing how Kate’s ability to care is also her greatest strength. Kate’s ability to care lends to her ability as a scientist; she doesn't see those suffering from the plague as experiments or casualties of a war or casualties on the road to the next stage of human evolution, rather, she sees them as actual human beings who deserve a chance to live just as much as she does. Reaching the end of this novel has me worried though due to Kate losing herself, losing who she is, due to the resurfacing of the memories and experiences of one of the original Atlanteans who came to Earth and gave humanity the Atlantis Gene. Yet, even knowing that she was risking losing herself, her personality, she was willing to give it up in order to protect and save humanity by discovering a cure for the Atlantis Plague. I am interested to see what Riddle has planned for Kate’s character in the next installment, The Atlantis World.
In my review of Riddle’s first novel The Atlantis Gene, I discussed some problems I had with the writing style Riddle utilized, specifically, how the build up felt too long and drawn out while the final confrontation and ensuing resolution felt too fast paced and not fleshed out enough. I just want to say that Riddle did an excellent job of avoiding that problem in The Atlantis Plague. I never felt as if the build up was dragging nor did I feel as if the final conflict and resolution were too fast paced, instead, the entire story arc kept a consistent pace which worked. Instead, what changed was how the prose was written, how the dialogue was written, word choice, etc; these seemingly little things allowed for Riddle to convey the specific feeling of the scene (whether the scene was fast paced and action packed or it was a calm slow leisurely discussion of scientists). This exhibits a lot of growing as a writer between the first novel and the second, and I just want to commend Riddle for this improvement because, personally, it allowed me to become more immersed in Kate’s story.
This installment of The Origin Mystery Trilogy has piqued my interest even more for the conclusion of the story in The Atlantis World; I want to see what this change in Kate will mean for her and what it will mean for her relationship with David. I want to see if Dorian will find the father figure he has always searched for, or if he will learn to be his own person. These are the exact feelings a trilogy’s second novel should invoke in a reader; the curiosity and the need for resolution. I am overall incredibly pleased with Riddle’s The Origin Mystery Trilogy and can’t wait to complete it.
Like the first, pretty hard to put down. Plot is a series of clichés that still kind of works. Good but not great, and not better than book one. Everything is better than book three.
