WardenRed reviewed The Spear Cuts Through Water by Simon Jiménez
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5 stars
This is a love story to its blade-dented bone.
Wow, this is an incredibly hard book to rate. On one hand, I almost automatically five-starred it simply for how it is written. I'm in awe of what the author has done with the narrative and the structure. All the POV work alone, and the whole story within a story/world within a world thing—I have no words. And the prose is so eloquent and intricate, too. Honestly, the shape of the story is so masterfully constructed, it's unbelievable. I took so many notes while I was reading. It's a novel, but it's also kind of a play, and a massive mythic folk tale, and OMG, I wish I knew how to make language and structure do such magic.
On the other hand, when it comes to the essence of the story... Well, the longer I sit here, having finished it, …
This is a love story to its blade-dented bone.
Wow, this is an incredibly hard book to rate. On one hand, I almost automatically five-starred it simply for how it is written. I'm in awe of what the author has done with the narrative and the structure. All the POV work alone, and the whole story within a story/world within a world thing—I have no words. And the prose is so eloquent and intricate, too. Honestly, the shape of the story is so masterfully constructed, it's unbelievable. I took so many notes while I was reading. It's a novel, but it's also kind of a play, and a massive mythic folk tale, and OMG, I wish I knew how to make language and structure do such magic.
On the other hand, when it comes to the essence of the story... Well, the longer I sit here, having finished it, the more I start feeling that it got a little lost under all the structural twists and curves. It was hard for me to connect with any of the characters, despite finding Jun's and Keema's journey really poignant. But it wasn't poignant in a way that made me perceive the characters as semi-real people existing at the intersection of the author's imagination and my own, as a reader. It was more like... the central themes of war and power and the impact they have? They shone really brightly through these characters' interactions, and the characters served their purpose really well as elements of the narrative. I don't know if I can explain it any better at this point.
Also, as I look back at the central plot, I feel like it was... maybe even a little bit less interesting than the framing device part, or at least some of the things the framing device part kept hinting at? If it wasn't for the structure, it would be fairly predictable, and it's more than a little slow. On the other hand, it sure was constructed in a way that showed off a lot of really amazing and skillful worldbuilding with plenty of original elements. But it still felt like what the story is came second to how it's told, and I'm not sure I'm a fan of this approach. At the same time, I do feel that the way the story's told is unique, beautiful, and also kind of makes all the darkness within the pages easier to bear (and trust me, there's a lot of darkness within these pages). When you're constantly figuring out the new angle to witness the narrative from, all the gore and the pain becomes just a little more artificial. Something that can't touch you on its own, but can be a vehicle to bring the themes home. Is that a good thing? Damn if I know. Maybe it's simply a little too litfic for my reading habits?..
