Llaverac commented on Witching Hour by Beth Fuller
Esio knows all the rules about travelling to the fae realm: stick to the path, …
Why do you tell the reader the rules of the fae realm if you... end up not using them? Who is the main character, Ted or Esio? I feel like none of them were fleshed out enough to know what the story wanted to say.
The fae realm looked magnificent though, it was worth it just for the visuals.