Why did I dislike this one so much? I kept wondering as I read, is this really Sir Terry, or is it poor fanfic? I found it heavyhanded, with an unpleasant aggressive edge and none of the warmth I expect in his books. It does improve: the last third develops themes of moral ambiguity with undertones of growth and loss... and redemption, although not enough to carry over into redeeming the entire book. Just enough to bump to three stars.