@pixouls great thoughts and I look forward to this one. Two responses:
"The whiteness and white people speaking on behalf of BIPOC folx and their experiences is overwhelming": this is a huge problem in book 2 also, and a massive oversight by the authors and editors — I don't know how anyone thought this was ok.
"I liked the inclusion of poems as a break": for me, they are not a break but are crucial as a way of storytelling that escapes the essay form. I just wish there was more poetry, artwork, photography, or other forms that are not essays, because there is too much voice given to that use of language.