I thought this dragged a bit in the middle. Nothing really happened, despite all the attacks. Also, I wasn't as shocked by the nature of the inconvenience as maybe the author hoped I would be. Lastly, I thought it ended pretty abruptly. Obviously there's more to the story and Heartless comes next but the last 2 chapters or so read like the last half hour to HP:7 part 1. You know there's more coming, but a true ending to this half of the story would have been appreciated.