mayorbeetles reviewed Vox by Christina Dalcher
Review of 'Vox' on 'Goodreads'
2 stars
This book will aggravate pretty much everybody. It seems written to bait conservatives with the obvious parallels to the Trump administration and popular religious figures; however, progressives who've studied gender theory, even a little, will notice that Vox explores these issues with all the nuance of a sledgehammer. If you're just here to enjoy the thriller, you will be disappointed with the mediocre writing, confusing action scenes and a "twist" I saw coming a mile away.I wanted to like this book because the premise is so bold, but the execution failed in a lot of ways.
Jean begins this story as a sheltered white woman, sitting in her ivory tower until things effect her personally. I was hoping to see her evolve, but she barely did. Her biggest takeaway from living in a totalitarian state is "my kids are good, men = bad, except this one particular sexy Italian man." She learns to appreciate Jackie, but doesn't give a second thought to the importance of people like Del and Sharon, nor does she seem to want to incorporate any lessons about gender equity into her life.
Additionally, Her characterization as a dedicated academic is shaky. She has a Ph.D. in linguistics, but her thought patterns and actions are short, confused, jumbled. She judges Jackie and Morgan for being crass, yet swears every other sentence and uses imprecise language (ex."There's something anime about him..."). Even when she's in her element, in her lab doing research, she is talking about men and ruminating on her personal life. I know there are many ways to be an academic, but Jean comes off as unfocused despite being the "leading expert in her field."
The other characters are more like caricatures; Jackie the scary feminist, Patrick the dopey husband, Lorenzo the sexy Italian. Steven had the most interesting character arc, showing how easily young men can and are being indoctrinated into extremism.
Finally, the plot. Everything went so incredibly right for these characters. You would think working in a government lab in a fascist regime would provide some tension, but at one point the steaks become so low, Jean and Lorenzo are straight up openly threatening their bosses. The beginning of the book felt like a thriller, but once Jean starts working in the lab, it's smooth sailing and leads to an unsatisfying climax. Then, she dips to Italy and we don't even get to the see the aftermath. The same transition was repeatedly ("Now, i'm…[flashback]") which was grating to read.
Vox is a high-concept work that fell flat. It does provide a lot of discussion fodder for book clubs, but it's not something I would recommend picking up for fun. Personally, I would love to read a redux with better writing told from Del and Sharon's perspective since we barely got to learn about the resistance.