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Brandon Sanderson: The Frugal Wizard's Handbook for Surviving Medieval England (2023, Dragonsteel) 4 stars

1 New York Times Bestselling author Brandon Sanderson meshes Jason Bourne and epic fantasy in …

A Celtic Boast that gets 5/5 Stars

5 stars

Brandon Sanderson is one of my favourite authors, so I didn't even bother reading the back of the book before starting this novel. There I was, on the first page, stunned that I was reading an amnesia story. Red flags were going off; this is one of my most hated tropes. Several hours later, I'm here expressing my disbelief that I actually enjoyed an amnesia story. Apparently this is considered the 'White Room' story style: where the narrator has to figure out who they are along with the reader. Keeping the reader in the dark is the critical difference, and what a difference it is!

In order to avoid spoilers, I'll simply expresss how well done the amnesia story element was. It drove character growth in a meaningful capacity while also avoiding irritating resolution mechanisms. All the downsides of the trope were avoided, and the fragments of the titular …

reviewed Warship by Joshua Dalzelle (Black Fleet Trilogy, #1)

Joshua Dalzelle: Warship (2015, CreateSpace Independent Publishing Platform, Createspace Independent Publishing Platform) 4 stars

Creative Worldbuilding and Perfect Execution

4 stars

A terrifying new enemy after centuries of peace and abundance is the setting for Warship, written by an author who looked at the immense expanse of space and asked: why fight? Typically the worldbuilding for a military sci-fi universe doesn't bother with such basic questions, but starting from the premise of near-infinite resources, readers are introduced to a natural, organically built society rich in politics and technological advancements that may arise in five-hundred years. What's truly impressive is this creative, deep worldbuilding comes through in small glimpses and brief interactions, because the plot of Warship is about a spaceship firing its guns in anger.

The overall story is lifted from similar novels in the Age of Sail category. There's an introductory shakedown cruise where you meet the Captain, his officers, and learn what you need to about the technological capabilities of the setting. There's the threats: career bureaucrats, political …

reviewed Trouble on Paradise by Craig Alanson (Expeditionary Force, #3.5)

Craig Alanson: Trouble on Paradise (2017, Independently published) 4 stars

Answering Questions No One Asked

2 stars

Authors often rewrite and cut major scenes out of their novels, either to improve pacing or just to respond to feedback of their editors and beta readers. Sometimes, those plotlines are beloved by its creator, but were left on the cutting room floor. Unfortunately, Trouble on Paradise is what happens when an author feels there's a story left to tell and refuses to let go.

This novella, weighing in at 33% the size, continues the adventures of the lesser narrators from Paradise and covers some of the gaps in that story. Skippy and Bishop don't appear in this book. While I never asked the question "What would Expeditionary Force feel like without our comedy duo?", I have the answer:

It's bland. Mediocre.

The author has no one on the bench that has the charisma to lead a story. As implied earlier, the story itself feels like material that wasn't important …

reviewed Paradise by Craig Alanson (Expeditionary Force, #3)

Craig Alanson: Paradise (Paperback, 2017, Independently published) 4 stars

While the crew of the starship Flying Dutchman have been trying assure hostile aliens do …

One Small Step For Humanity

4 stars

Paradise is an improvement over its predecessor while maintaining its core formula: a lighthearted space adventure driven by the buddy-comedy duo of Skippy and Bishop. While its predecessor felt very episodic, this novel widens its scope to address the social-political impact of humans taking their first steps on the galactic stage.

Craig Alanson takes a further risk and introduces new POVs. This is a welcome change! Bishop's solo narration is joined by a variety of new characters. As a military sci-fi novel, often the solution to most problems involves guns and explosions. Battles were never tense though, as the fate of Skippy and Bishop is never in doubt. New narrators don't have such plot armour and so the novel is tenser and more vivid than its predecessors.

The worldbuilding deepens by returning to familiar territory. Previous time spent explaining the political situation of the Ruhar, Kristang and UNEF on Paradise …

reviewed SpecOps by Craig Alanson (Expeditionary Force, #2)

Craig Alanson: SpecOps (Paperback, 2017, Independently published) 4 stars

The sequel to 'Columbus Day'. Colonel Joe Bishop made a promise and he's going to …

A Lighthearted Romp Through Space for Stargate: EF-1

3 stars

SpecOps is a fun space adventure with a military angle. Defying easy categorization, it's most similar to the Stargate series, where professional infantry explore the universe and slowly help Earth improve its technology against near God-like opposition. Even the tone is the same: lighthearted, full of witty banter, and set in some complex military scenarios.

Despite the comedy duo of our main characters, victories are won through clever rule-bending or extrapolations of known limitations. The author has thought through what technology can and cannot do, and everything is internally consistent. As a reader who demands self-serious novels, this is something I look for in the worldbuilding of advanced technology.

But while the author avoids treating his worldbuilding like a joke, Skippy the AI's comedic presence and caustic personality will decide if you like the Expeditionary Force series. He was the big twist in Columbus Day and, in my humble opinion, …

reviewed The Burning White by Brent Weeks (Lightbringer, book 5)

Brent Weeks: The Burning White (Hardcover, 2019, Orbit) 4 stars

In the stunning conclusion to the epic, New York Times bestselling Lightbringer series by Brent …

Conservative in Pacing, Imagination and Messaging

1 star

The Burning White is divisive ending, and a great deal of your enjoyment will be dependent on your relationship with the Christian God. I understand the hate. There are many great critiques that analyze this flaw so I will instead focus in a different direction. I found the novel to be entertaining, but ultimately hollow as I finished the climax and denoument.

The biggest failure with this book is its literal size. It's HUGE. It's two books bundled as one. My expectations grew larger with every page that passed. Unfortunately it tells a simple story using the three-act structure, which means the pacing is incredibly slow. Everything in the first half is inconsequential and repeated four times for all four main characters. All the revelations are in the back half. By keeping all the good stuff to the end, final battles with multi-book villains are short, underdeveloped, and their resolutions …

reviewed Columbus Day by Craig Alanson (Expeditionary Force, #1)

Craig Alanson: Columbus Day (Paperback, 2017, Independently published) 4 stars

We were fighting on the wrong side, of a war we couldn't win. And that …

Skip a Bit, Brother

3 stars

Columbus Day is an introduction to the Expeditionary Force sci-fi universe, and it's slow. It's barely science-fiction to start, beginning with present-day first contact with an alien species. We spend time waiting for human society to grow up, recognize its place in the cosmos, and slowly upgrade its technology. To add insult to injury, the sole narrator is an American ground pounder who constantly reminds us of his simple origins and lack of ambition, all the while narrating with an aw-shucks attitude. The charicature of a down-to-earth, non-intellectual everyman is almost comically laughable.

I'm being unfair, but those two points produced a wall that I needed to overcome, without quite knowing what's on the other side. How could this mediocre slog be worth (as of 2023) fourteen additional novels?

And then I got it. Halfway into the novel and the story truly began. The back-half is everything I wanted: …

reviewed The Blood Mirror by Brent Weeks (Lightbringer, #4)

Brent Weeks: The Blood Mirror (Hardcover, 2016, Orbit) 4 stars

"The Seven Satrapies have collapsed into four-and those are falling before the White King's armies. …

Needs More Gavin

4 stars

The Blood Mirror had to meet some lofty expectations, as The Broken Eye ended on a combination of climaxes, cliffhangers, and revelations that is the author's signature. Brent Weeks knows how to whip up the fans into a froth, and I tore into the fourth novel expecting sheer brilliance. This is tough to pull off. I want a novel that ramps up slowly, but simultaneously coming off a thrilling conclusion, I want the book to keep going at the blistering pace of a third act.

I think The Blood Mirror is a success there. There are plenty of scenes that are the calm before the storm, but they're still tense and full of energy. And the novel lands some of the biggest surprises of the series so far, and that's really saying something.

My biggest gripe is that Kip is the star instead of Gavin Guile. This confuses even the …

reviewed The Midnight Line by Lee Child (Jack Reacher, #22)

Lee Child, Lee Child: The Midnight Line (Hardcover, 2017, Delacorte Press) 4 stars

"#1 New York Times bestselling author Lee Child returns with a gripping new powerhouse thriller …

A Forgettable Story with an Important Message

3 stars

The Midnight Line represents the floor of Lee Child's refined Reacher formula - it's a supremely entertaining read whether it's your first, or twenty-second experience with the series. At the same time, there's nothing in this that excels. It's thoroughly mediocre but comforting... like cold leftover pizza.

All the strengths are here: the core mystery is intriguing, the action rare but rapid and vicious when it occurs, and attention to details shows in every element of the background research as well as the intricate timed plotlines. All the weaknesses are here too: the side characters are forgettable, the conclusion is always too abrupt, and Reacher just has to get-the-girl.

I also intellectually appreciate the effort spent showing all sides of a modern crisis, but there's a degree of delicacy that needs to be exercised when discussing something that is relevant to modern politics. I felt the author ended up on …

reviewed The Broken Eye by Brent Weeks (Lightbringer, #3)

Brent Weeks: The Broken Eye (Paperback, 2015, Orbit) 4 stars

Without the protection of Gavin Guile, who has been captured and enslaved and has lost …

And Now For a Half-Time Break!

3 stars

I was so excited by the previous books that I was halfway through The Broken Eye before realizing that it was an inexplicable slog. With over a thousand pages before it, numerous cliffhangers and loose threads to resolve, even without author fiat, the narrators should have had sufficient momentum to carry the plot forward.

Instead, The Broken Eye is a directionless mess. Brent Weeks took the incredible action-packed climax of The Blinding Knife and called a timeout. Everything is put on hold. Gavin and Kip find themselves without agency, removed from events of importance while the world passes them by. Karis is written out of the story, with as many narrative chapters as Aliviana. The war, always the backdrop, barely warrants a mention. The only character who is doing anything of value is Teia.

This is partially due to the ambiguity of our antagonists, something I previously praised. It's a …

reviewed Dead Lions by Mick Herron (Slough House, #2)

Mick Herron: Dead Lions (2013, Soho Press) 4 stars

This Book is Better despite a lack of Gary Oldman

4 stars

Unlike Slow Horses, Dead Lions is a novel that does better than its (enjoyable) TV adaptation. It's also different enough that viewers will also enjoy reading the source material. As events diverged from what I had seen, I started to understand what fans of Mike Herron already know: the Slough House series is an intricately plotted thriller where much of the drama comes from subtle character interactions. There is so much clever detail hidden throughout the story that I suspect a re-read would still have one discovering new surprises. Yet at the same time, the first read is tense as you witness the slow unravelling of a mystery, have your expectations dashed, and watch Jackson Lamb do what he does best.

The TV adaptation takes Dead Lions as inspiration for the second season. While the setup is similar, the back half of the book is different, resulting in a …

reviewed Slow Horses by Mick Herron (Slough House, #1)

Mick Herron: Slow Horses (2011, Isis) 4 stars

Slough House is Jackson Lamb's kingdom; a dumping ground for members of the intelligence service …

The TV Show is Better because of Gary Oldman

3 stars

I'm embarassed to say that I prefer the TV adaptation of Slow Horses, and don't think viewers will get anything out of reading the original novel. Typically I expect that the novel is deeper, smarter, and more complex than a TV series. Unfortunately for us readers, the adaptation is very faithful to the source material while suffering the sin of not having Gary Oldman.

The TV series provides many more scenes of Jackson Lamb tearing it up, delivering hilarious verbal abuse that is part of the charm of Slow Horses. The showrunners gave Gary Oldman more material and as a result, the novel feels like it's holding out on us. There's also a sense of effortless gravitas in an actor of his skill, and so while the novel tries to surprise you with Jackson Lamb's hidden talent, viewers instinctively know that underneath the dirty jacket is a man …

reviewed Blinding Knife by Brent Weeks (Lightbringer, #2)

Brent Weeks: Blinding Knife (Paperback, 2013, Orbit) 4 stars

The Blinding Knife is a 2012 epic fantasy novel by New York Times Bestselling author …

An Illuminating Follow Up

5 stars

The Blinding Knife is the kind of sequel you want in a great series: it takes the foundational elements laid in the first novel and delivers more of what you loved while expanding the world. The politics are appropriately convoluted, our knowledge of drafting appears to be the tip of the magical iceberg, and the religious/historical treatment of wights becomes so morally ambigious that it upends everything you thought you knew. It's also an exceptionally tense novel. The story is long and you end up growing quite attached to the leads, but a sense of dread is pervasive throughout because you know at any moment, things will go terribly wrong. Brent Weeks spends most his storyline torturing his characters and it's rare that anything goes well for them.

That said, this novel isn't so much about Gavin Guile as it is about Kip. The teenager gets the kind of growth …

reviewed Night School by Lee Child (Jack Reacher, #21)

Lee Child: Night School (Paperback, 2017, Dell) 3 stars

It’s 1996, and Reacher is still in the army. In the morning they give him …

The First Prequel I Liked

4 stars

Night School is the first Reacher prequel novel that I actually like, where he's in his prime as an MP but events aren't written overtly to bridge the gap to The Killing Floor and the events in Margrave. I've found previous prequels to be hamfisted in those attempts, and the central mystery to be boring compared to modern-day Reacher settings.

Lee Child also delivers everything in the highly refined Reacher formula: the mystery is excellent, the action is rare, but brutally violent when it occurs, and the details are critical and carefully thought through. Reacher has an excellent foil in Neagley, who is the only ex-Special Investigator with a personality that I can recall and isn't the standard Lee Child female character. The weaknesses are also the same... for me, that's the standard cringeworthy Reacher-gets-the-girl plotline, which is completely unnecessary but probably services a certain subset of readers, as well …