WardenRed reviewed Air awakens by Elise Kova
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2 stars
Because, Vhalla, you think and you watch, but you never do.
I'm honestly not quite sure what made me finish the book. The writing was pleasant enough, I guess? Also, I kept waiting for the story to pick up or for the main character to finally start making decisions, and by the time I gave up on that hope, the book was so close to the end, anyway.
It's really one of those rare cases where I have next to nothing good to say about the plot or the character. It's a collection of cliches. I have nothing against tried and true tropes; I love them! But I feel like they exist to be explored, or twisted, or put together in ways that at least feel fresh. Here, everything is just played too straight. We have a reluctant protagonist who is oh so special because she's the last …
Because, Vhalla, you think and you watch, but you never do.
I'm honestly not quite sure what made me finish the book. The writing was pleasant enough, I guess? Also, I kept waiting for the story to pick up or for the main character to finally start making decisions, and by the time I gave up on that hope, the book was so close to the end, anyway.
It's really one of those rare cases where I have next to nothing good to say about the plot or the character. It's a collection of cliches. I have nothing against tried and true tropes; I love them! But I feel like they exist to be explored, or twisted, or put together in ways that at least feel fresh. Here, everything is just played too straight. We have a reluctant protagonist who is oh so special because she's the last of her kind (but she thinks herself plain, and she's permanently stuck in the Refusal of the Call stage of her hero's journey). We have a love triangle layered on top of another love triangle, and the relationship we're (probably) supposed to root for is frankly toxic. We have lots of informed attributes—the main character is supposed to be this smart bookworm, but I'm not sure she's made a single smart decision, and while she reads a lot, it doesn't feel like she thinks that much about what she reads or interacts with the information in ways that aren't simply absorbing facts.
The worldbuilding held promise, although it was clearly heavily inspired by Avatar the Last Airbender. Even so, I felt like there were potentially exciting twists here and I was excited to learn more. Unfortunately, the characters didn't really interact with the world in a meaningful way most of the time. They simply spoke and read about it a lot. The world barely ever expanded beyond a "generic castle with a generic wizard tower." Most of the story also felt pretty juvenile. I know it's YA, but there were times when I thought maybe I was reading an MG book, until a character randomly said something that seemed like a heavy-handed reminder: "Look! They're not that young! They mention sex! It's YA, after all!"
Perhaps this simply wasn't a book for me.