surya reviewed the sun and her flowers by Rupi Kaur
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1 star
If you want to read sad yet beautiful poetry that brings out the emotion in you, try "Essential Rumi" by Coleman Barks.
Paperback, 265 pages
English language
Published Jan. 4, 2017 by Andrews McMeel Publishing.
Divided into five chapters and illustrated by Kaur, the sun and her flowers is a journey of wilting, falling, rooting, rising, and blooming. A celebration of love in all its forms.
If you want to read sad yet beautiful poetry that brings out the emotion in you, try "Essential Rumi" by Coleman Barks.
My enjoyment of this book was very mood-dependent. The overdramatic part of me quite liked it.
🌻Some thoughts on Rupi Kaur🌻
So I just finished both of Kaur's books (Milk and Honey; The Sun and Her Flowers).
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Overall, I'm just unimpressed with her work and don’t understand a lot of the hype surrounding her books-- which I'm sure people would gasp at. But the thing is, this doesn't feel like poetry, and I'll tell you why.
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This is supposed to be poetry and not prose, but it seems to be only classified as poetry because of the rhythm and enjambment. And that, to me, isn't enough to make it poetry (on paper that is-- performed this would be very effective content).
To me it seems that when you decide to write poetry, you're sacrificing the telling and replacing it with the showing, if that makes sense. And Kaur wants to have her cake and eat it too, that is, have the rhythm of poetry …
🌻Some thoughts on Rupi Kaur🌻
So I just finished both of Kaur's books (Milk and Honey; The Sun and Her Flowers).
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Overall, I'm just unimpressed with her work and don’t understand a lot of the hype surrounding her books-- which I'm sure people would gasp at. But the thing is, this doesn't feel like poetry, and I'll tell you why.
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This is supposed to be poetry and not prose, but it seems to be only classified as poetry because of the rhythm and enjambment. And that, to me, isn't enough to make it poetry (on paper that is-- performed this would be very effective content).
To me it seems that when you decide to write poetry, you're sacrificing the telling and replacing it with the showing, if that makes sense. And Kaur wants to have her cake and eat it too, that is, have the rhythm of poetry without having to use the concrete images that I think poetry requires.
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That's not to say that her content isn't valid or "good," but if I were to ask someone who their favorite poet was and they were to reply with Rupi Kaur, I would give some more suggestions and hope that they don't think Kaur is the be all end all of contemporary poetry.
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And don't get me wrong, there are contemporary poets who miss the mark completely to me for being TOO abstract with their concrete images to the point where I'm just lost and expecting someone to be like "Well that's the POINT. You're supposed to feel lost. The author wants to convey the feeling of being lost."
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Kaur, to reiterate my point, actually HAS to plop in concrete images every 20 or so lines because she runs the risk of losing her reader in her, albeit hypnotic, pep-talky rant. Her hyper-enjambed style compels one to just ZOOM through her books, with the occasional concrete image there to slow you back down.
I get it, bold subjects of assault, patriarchy, immigration, and love/loss. But the writing is abysmal, juvenile, and rhythmless.