The prose was good, I enjoyed the beginning, but I feel as though because it was trying to keep up with the events of The Wonderful Wizard of Oz (which it wasn't particularly good at) it led the story to become bitter, stale, full of plot holes and developments coming out of nowhere.
And as other reviewers have mentioned, the sexual development of minor characters being described was very uncomfortable. I understand the vibe they were going with some of them, but it wasn't as necessary as they probably thought it was.









