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Amber Herbert

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Writer of (mostly) speculative fiction Author of Lipstick Covered Magnet Bookworm, elder emo, self-proclaimed film critic Find me here: amberherbert.com/ Or here: linksta.cc/@amberherbert

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5% complete! Amber Herbert has read 2 of 36 books.

Lisa Cron: Story genius (2016) 4 stars

"Following on the heels of Lisa Cron's breakout first book, Wired for Story, this writing …

As someone who already knows that characters and their internal struggles and arcs make great stories, this is a chunky book with little to offer. If you didn't enjoy Save the Cat, I don't recommend this one. While some of the initial tips might help if you're struggling to write compelling characters that propel the plot, the latter half is all about incorporating the author's outlining system. If you want another formula to follow, go ahead and give this a whirl. If you'd rather learn about how to incorporate your character's internal conflict with the big-picture turmoil of the plot, I'd sooner point you to Brandon Sanderson's lectures (free on the Tube).

Note: I read straight through page 111 and skimmed the rest.

Aimie K. Runyan, Kathleen Gati, Lisa Flanagan, Michael Crouch: Across the Winding River (AudiobookFormat, 2020, Brilliance Audio) 4 stars

A Story of Love and War

4 stars

Across the Winding River centers around three narrators who become intertwined as the story progresses. Both a story of love and war, this novel has something for every historical fiction reader.

Though the story is captivating and a breeze to get through, I didn't appreciate the two main coincidences of the plot. Some of the plot points were far too convenient, resulting in a four-star rating instead of a five.

Jessica Payne: Make Me Disappear (2022, Bookouture) 4 stars

By the time I realized the truth about Daniel it was too late. But the …

For Fans of Caroline Kepnes's "You"

4 stars

Make Me Disappear is an intriguing take on obsessive and controlling relationships. Noelle, a nurse in her twenties, realizes she needs to break away from her doctor boyfriend and plans her own kidnapping. I appreciated the dual narrative, and the prose was written well; it kept me engaged the whole way through.

My only criticism is that there were far too many coincidentals and/or unbelievable plot points. I also saw the twist coming a mile away, though that isn't necessarily a bad thing.

Overall, this was a solid debut, and I look forward to reading more by Jessica Payne. I'd recommend this novel if you enjoyed the You series.

Nikki St. Crowe: The Never King (2022, Blackwell House LLC) 2 stars

The stories were all wrong — Hook was never the villain.

For two centuries, all …

Biker Gang Lost Boys? No Thanks.

2 stars

I love Peter Pan, so I thought I'd give this spicy retelling a shot after hearing so much about it on Instagram and TikTok.

I'd like to preface this review by saying spicy lit is not my thing. So, my review will focus more on the plot than the sex scenes.

Positives 1. Use of source material. Crowe incorporates locations, myths, and characters from Barrie's novel. I love when a retelling takes advantage of the original text to ground the story. Places like Marooners' Rock and Mysterious River are mentioned explicitly. Fairies (or fae in this case), mermaids, and pirates are present. Characters like Tinker Bell, Tootles, and Hook are name-dropped. The twins and Pan are key players. Overall, I felt the use of source material gave this story an edge. 2. Plot and world building. The amount of effort given to the story pleasantly surprised me. I expected little …

Emily Tesh: Some Desperate Glory (2023, Doherty Associates, LLC, Tom) 4 stars

While we live, the enemy shall fear us.

All her life Kyr has trained for …

A Space Opera with Lots to Unpack

5 stars

Some Desperate Glory is a space opera set after Earth's destruction. Gaea Station, home to a radical group of warbreed humans, has pitted itself against the majo race, the ones who annihilated their homeland. Without spoiling anything, the novel is a whirlwind of moral turmoil, intergalactic politics, and the Wisdom's immense power over all of existence.

Valkyr, our ornery and entitled protagonist, is tough to love but easy to understand. While there were times I wanted to throttle her for being so short-sighted and petty, I often felt she desperately needed a hug. Mags and Avi were fun characters, and I believe their presence really rounded out Valkyr's dominating personality. However, Yiso (the majo prisoner), was my absolute favorite of them all.

It took me about 100 pages to really get into the story, but after that I was hooked. The novel is formatted into five parts, and by the …

Annalee Newitz: The Terraformers (Hardcover, Tor Books) 4 stars

From science fiction visionary Annalee Newitz comes The Terraformers, a sweeping, uplifting, and illuminating exploration …

Environmentally Positive Sci-Fi

4 stars

If you're looking for a book that spans hundreds of years and takes on a hopeful approach to humankind's future within the universe, I recommend giving this a go. The prose is inviting and vibrant, and I loved the descriptions of Sask-E and its enticing ecosystem. While some parts felt a little too long, I enjoyed most of it and believe any reader who enjoys environmentally positive plot lines will enjoy this novel.

reviewed Beyond Forsaken Worlds by J.P. McDonald (The Gemarine Chronicles, #1)

J.P. McDonald: Beyond Forsaken Worlds 5 stars

Welcome to Gemarine: utopian home to a select group of Aranthers, Sytheracts and Humans.

You …

If You're Looking For Spicy Sci-Fi

5 stars

Beyond Forsaken Worlds is a fresh intergalactic romp dappled with action, multi-faceted creatures, and desire.

Going in, I had no idea what I was signing up for... but that only elevated my enjoyment. McDonald's prose is beautiful, weaving vibrant descriptions with satisfying world building. The characters are unique, and I found something to love about each and every one of them.

Also, that cliffhanger! I'm so glad I don't have to wait for the answers like everyone else (the perks of being a beta reader).

My only criticism pertains to the intimate scenes and sexual tension throughout the novel. It isn't the main focus, but it might put off readers who aren't looking for sexy sci-fi. As a reader who generally strays away from books with a fair amount of sex, I found the scenes surprisingly interesting and in aid of the group's dynamic.

If you dig foul-mouthed heroines, conservationist …

reviewed Beyond the Bounds of Time by J.P. McDonald (The Gemarine Chronicles, #2)

J.P. McDonald: Beyond the Bounds of Time 5 stars

"Contentment through unity. Protection through war."

Welcome to the Multiverse: where threads of time writhe …

Spicy Sci-Fi

5 stars

Beyond the Bounds of Time is a phenomenal sequel to Beyond Forsaken Worlds. Part time travel voyage and part found family story, it reads like an R-rated Guardians of the Galaxy with a time travel flair. Poignant and heart-wrenching prose is balanced by friendly banter and raunchy quips. While the book gets spicy in a few chapters, the novel's emphasis is on conservation, love (both romantic and familial), and loss.

I would recommend this to anyone looking for a fun time travel story with lovable but flawed characters and a dash of spice.