G. Deyke reviewed Ice Massacre (Mermaids of Eriana Kwai Book 1) by Tiana Warner (Mermaids of Eriana Kwai, #1)
Blood and gore for younger teens and preteens
3 stars
I keep hearing about books, forgetting all context by the time I have a hold of them, and then being surprised when they turn out to be for younger audiences. This one isn't bad, but despite all the violence and bloodshed and the horrors of war and whatnot (quite explicitly described, in parts), it's clearly aimed at people in maybe the 8-14 range. Given that, it's... fine? I would've enjoyed it younger and I enjoyed it now, enough to want to read how it goes on, but it's not something that's likely to really stay with me.
It does have one major flaw, which is the narration in the flashback chapters where Meela is a younger kid. It does the thing which is almost unavoidably common in children's books (and, apparently, books from children's perspectives) - the patronising, dumbed-down style of narration - and which incredibly annoys me …
I keep hearing about books, forgetting all context by the time I have a hold of them, and then being surprised when they turn out to be for younger audiences. This one isn't bad, but despite all the violence and bloodshed and the horrors of war and whatnot (quite explicitly described, in parts), it's clearly aimed at people in maybe the 8-14 range. Given that, it's... fine? I would've enjoyed it younger and I enjoyed it now, enough to want to read how it goes on, but it's not something that's likely to really stay with me.
It does have one major flaw, which is the narration in the flashback chapters where Meela is a younger kid. It does the thing which is almost unavoidably common in children's books (and, apparently, books from children's perspectives) - the patronising, dumbed-down style of narration - and which incredibly annoys me every time I come across it because it doesn't have to be this way, some of my favourite books are for kids and they're all the better for not doing this; but apparently this is a minority opinion, given how ubiquitous it is.
There's also some weird stuff going on with the worldbuilding, ie, the modern setting and relative recentness of the mermaid threat call into question the use of crossbows vs. guns (maybe there's a good reason, but it's never explained) and the "traditional" use of sex-segregated 18-year-olds for the massacre. But, you know, it's fine. Everyone likes a good teenage-social-conflict-against-a-bloody-backdrop-of-senseless-violence book.














