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3 stars
Bonkers - but still somehow less derivative than the original it parodies.
In this alternative version of J.K. Rowling's famous tale, Petunia Evans marries the biochemist Michael Verres. The couple adopts her orphaned nephew. Christened "Harry James Potter-Evans-Verres," he is raised in an environment of science, knowledge, and rationality. Upon discovering the wizarding world, he prepares to turn it upside down with his keen intellect.
Bonkers - but still somehow less derivative than the original it parodies.
Une fan-fiction qui a sa petite célébrité et a été citée dans divers journaux à son époque (elle a été terminée en 2015). Elle est disponible gratuitement en ligne. Je l’ai lue en anglais, il existe une traduction française, mais en lisant quelques lignes du chapitre 1 elle m’a semblée mauvaise, donc je n’ai pas poursuivi.
Dans cette histoire alternative, Harry a été élevé par des parents aimants (notamment un père professeur de biologie à l’université) et est un nerd absolu, un je-sais-tout qui ne jure que par la méthode scientifique et la psychologie évolutive.
Le jour où il est intronisé dans le monde de la magie, il n’a de cesse de se servir de son éducation scientifique pour, d’une part, découvrir les véritables lois de la magie et, d’autre part, mettre sens dessus dessous le monde des sorciers.
L’intrigue reprend les personnages et des évènements de la série d’origine, …
Une fan-fiction qui a sa petite célébrité et a été citée dans divers journaux à son époque (elle a été terminée en 2015). Elle est disponible gratuitement en ligne. Je l’ai lue en anglais, il existe une traduction française, mais en lisant quelques lignes du chapitre 1 elle m’a semblée mauvaise, donc je n’ai pas poursuivi.
Dans cette histoire alternative, Harry a été élevé par des parents aimants (notamment un père professeur de biologie à l’université) et est un nerd absolu, un je-sais-tout qui ne jure que par la méthode scientifique et la psychologie évolutive.
Le jour où il est intronisé dans le monde de la magie, il n’a de cesse de se servir de son éducation scientifique pour, d’une part, découvrir les véritables lois de la magie et, d’autre part, mettre sens dessus dessous le monde des sorciers.
L’intrigue reprend les personnages et des évènements de la série d’origine, mais ne s’empêche en rien de briser le canon sur de nombreux points (par exemple sur l’insignifiance de Ron dans HPMOR, et l’importance relative beaucoup plus importante de Hermione).
D’emblée, le personnage d’Harry est plutôt agaçant, même si, comme nerd ayant eu une éducation scientifique, je peux ressentir par empathie ses angoisses concernant la façon dont l’existence de la magie semble détruire totalement l’édifice scientifique Moldu, ainsi que devant l’irrationnalité totale de la société des sorciers.
C’est assez difficile d’apprécier Harry, voire même de le trouver crédible. Son côté dramatique, le fait qu’il n’hésite pas de façon répétée à faire de grands discours affectés devant tout Poudlard, n’aide pas à l’identification, même s’il y a un petit côté représentation autiste là-dedans.
Tout cela étant dit, je dois admettre que l’œuvre est assez addictive. Il y a d’assez belles trouvailles de scénario qui m’ont fait lire jusqu’au bout, malgré des séquences qui faisaient vraiment filler et que j’ai trouvées assez sans intérêt (les batailles entre élèves organisées par Quirrell, principalement).
Le désir le plus profond de Harry, on l’apprend assez vite, est de vaincre la Mort — qu’il considère comme une souffrance inutile et absurde de la vie humaine. Ce combat chez lui est assez fascinant et s’intègre pas mal au lore des Reliques de la Mort, et en fait un adversaire intéressant pour Voldemort, plus que le Harry original qui est une incarnation caricaturale du Héros Moralement Bon. Ça fait également plaisir de retrouver les personnages et l’univers d’Harry Potter dans une histoire bien construite.
Voilà pour l’intrigue et ses points forts. Maintenant, comment ne pas voir dans l’obsession de Harry les rêves d’un techbro de la Silicon Valley ? (Il me semble que l’auteur de ce milieu-là, mais je n’ai pas vraiment creusé, et ce n’est pas pour autant que je vais cancel l’œuvre ou nier les choses positives qu’elle apporte.) Vouloir abolir la Mort avant d’abolir la misère, la pauvreté, la guerre et tous autres malheur évitables. Sans aucun doute, si on l’interroge à ce sujet, Harry dira que ça fait partie de ses buts. Mais il n’en parle pas, et en général la focalisation du techbro sur la Mort est en droite ligne de son angoisse de bourgeois qui a tout, et qui voudrait bien en profiter pour l’éternité, c’est là le seul confort matériel qui lui manque.
Cette ambition autocentrée va va de pair avec une morale utilitariste qui est l’alpha et l’oméga de la réflexion éthique de Harry. Comme chez tout techbro, cet utilitarisme est parfaitement aveugle aux fleuves de souffrance qui alimentent les flux du capitalisme, qu’ils soient la domination salariale, ou l’esclavage pur, l’impérialisme qui provoque guerres et génocides, les famines qui pourraient être évitées…
Ce point aveugle gigantesque est agaçant, bien sûr. Tout aussi agaçant que ces techbro pas malins de la Silicon Valley, qui malgré toute leur intelligence n’ont visiblement pas lu plus de trois livres de philosophie dans leur vie. Cela étant dit, ça ne m’a pas empêché d’apprécier ce roman. J’ai passé de bons moments à lire et me suis pris à avoir du mal à le poser, et hâte de le reprendre.
This did a great job of stirring up my nostalgia for the source books while adding many entertaining and interesting ideas. Some parts were better than others but I'm pretty sure the end of this book was better than the original, I was glued to it for the last hour or two.
Sometimes it slows down for some time and these parts could be boring, but after that goes pretty interesting action compensating the waiting.
I was tipped of to this after a long online HP rant elsewhere.
The first few paragraphs showed me that Rowling, while not necessarily a good writer, is better than some other, and that the editing of HP, something i complained about, too, was solid, if not perfect.
Then i read most of the first three chapters, and it’s quite clear that the author has an axe to grind, something less like “the world building in the Harry Potter books is inconsistent and not thought through” but closer to “suspension of disbelief is silly and i want to show that magic can’t work in this world”. I’ll leave him at it without reading on.
Honestly, this is better than the original.
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Books with a driven purpose usually irk the heck out of me. Most of this, however, was a great deal of fun. And, later, still a whole pile of fun.
Awesome book!
I appreciate Yudkowsky's world view, but I don't have that much faith in cognitive sciences and I think it's a few centuries (millennia?) too early to seriously think about godlike AIs and immortality. Nevertheless his ideas make for fantastic material for a book! It's all quite playful and yet the pages are oozing clever thoughts. It's a super long book and made still longer by having to stop and carefully consider the subjects yourself. I found the moral and political questions most interesting.
All the clever thoughts give a strong foundation to the book. It's never just an abstract mystery thanks to them. But the in-universe plots built upon this foundation are also nice. The action sequences where Harry (or someone else) figures out a clever solution to a problem are the most entertaining parts. They are really ingenious in a way similar to those in [b:The Martian|18007564|The …
Awesome book!
I appreciate Yudkowsky's world view, but I don't have that much faith in cognitive sciences and I think it's a few centuries (millennia?) too early to seriously think about godlike AIs and immortality. Nevertheless his ideas make for fantastic material for a book! It's all quite playful and yet the pages are oozing clever thoughts. It's a super long book and made still longer by having to stop and carefully consider the subjects yourself. I found the moral and political questions most interesting.
All the clever thoughts give a strong foundation to the book. It's never just an abstract mystery thanks to them. But the in-universe plots built upon this foundation are also nice. The action sequences where Harry (or someone else) figures out a clever solution to a problem are the most entertaining parts. They are really ingenious in a way similar to those in [b:The Martian|18007564|The Martian|Andy Weir|https://d.gr-assets.com/books/1413706054s/18007564.jpg|21825181]. The clash of magic and rationality are an endless source of fun!
Then there is a good amount of playing around with the characters. It's okay, I suppose, but I'm not a huge Harry Potter fan, so some of it is lost on me. (I've only read the first few original books.)
I've read some other reviews complaining of how Harry Potter does not talk like a real 11-year-old and how he's too much of a jerk. On one hand it's explained in the book and is a core part of the story. On the other hand I can see that it can take away from the enjoyment if someone wants a more regular Harry Potter. I did greatly enjoy some parts though where Harry is impolite intentionally, just to be reciprocal. Why is it okay for an adult to talk down to a kid but not the other way? Because the adult is stronger physically? Yeah, see how that works out if the kid has a magic wand!
Very entertaining piece of work. Highly recommended especially if you are interested in "rationality".
I heard third-hand that this ended on a cliffhanger, and that really slowed my progress about 4/5ths of the way through the book. But it was NOT TRUE! Anyway, not only does this conclude quite nicely, but the finale was fittingly intense, and definitely lived up to the buildup of the rest of the novel.
There were some long-ish bouts before the end that felt a bit indulgent, (didn't necessarily feel like they were going anywhere, or contributing to the story arc, etc.), but if you are a HP fan (and why would you be reading this if you aren't?), then they were usually interesting in some way in their own right. Generally speaking, I felt like the writing got better over time, and what was in my opinion "fun" in the beginning became downright GOOD later on, and concluded in a way that was both brilliant and obviously well …
I heard third-hand that this ended on a cliffhanger, and that really slowed my progress about 4/5ths of the way through the book. But it was NOT TRUE! Anyway, not only does this conclude quite nicely, but the finale was fittingly intense, and definitely lived up to the buildup of the rest of the novel.
There were some long-ish bouts before the end that felt a bit indulgent, (didn't necessarily feel like they were going anywhere, or contributing to the story arc, etc.), but if you are a HP fan (and why would you be reading this if you aren't?), then they were usually interesting in some way in their own right. Generally speaking, I felt like the writing got better over time, and what was in my opinion "fun" in the beginning became downright GOOD later on, and concluded in a way that was both brilliant and obviously well reasoned. There were a great many surprising and really interesting re-imaginings of character motivations and histories.
I very much enjoyed reading this. It's probably not for everyone, but I found it very satisfying.
After countless reddit recommendations I had to give HPMOR a try and I'm very glad I did. This was the first and likely the only fan fiction I will ever read but I definitely recommend it.
Hard to describe what makes HPMOR work so well. Trying to understand magic using science. Intelligent characters outsmarting each other and acting in their best interest, not the interest of the plot. Teaching readers to think rationally.
Seriously, give it a try.
Exceptionally awesome.
In progress. Very pleased with my first foray into fan fiction, though. These characters are considerably more interesting than Rowling's.
Mind twisting fan fiction based in the HP universe. I can never go back to reading the Harry Potter canon now.
https://www.hpmor.com
.https://hpmorpodcast.com/?page_id=56
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